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    Sylvan Mastery

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    [OOC/Sign-Ups]Chaos Apocalypse

    Post by Sylvan Mastery on Thu Apr 23, 2015 12:37 pm

    In a dark world where the sun has ceased to exist anymore, the land is still full of terror from the times when the Supreme Overlord used to reign his terror across the land, trust and safety is still a large issue. Ever since he was defeated everyone has returned from beyond the stars, but nobody remembers anything or anyone. Those who survived have been reunited with their family, but the cost was too severe, as the members didnt even know who they are. There is now rumors spreading that He who has beaten the Supreme Overlord has risen the ranks of the dark army and will now take over this world. Everyone is panicking on the inside, unsure of how this Chosen One will react to his taste of power, but they keep calm on the outside for fear of him revealing his evil side upon them.
       

    But not for long.

    Ashata Kuromura, a boy of 16 years with Jet black hair and blue tips, has decided to take action. As he stands on the Cliff overlooking the largest city in this part of the world, Chian, he pulls out a piece of paper from his dragonic-like armored black and purple pants and opens it up. As he opens it, the paper slowly reveals a wanted poster with him on it, offering $500,000 for the capture of him alive or $250,000 for him dead. "Guess its time for me to go to this land and hope for the best," he says as he folds the paper back up and puts it in his pocket. He climbs onto his White stallion and starts his decent into the town.

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    Hello all, Welcome to my roleplay! Now i just want to address that this IS a finely detailed setting and i would LOVE for it to stay that way! I will always update it more as the story progresses! Also, feel free to use any deck that you want, as my deck will be two archetypes put together! Have fun!

    Also, some questions that i have been asked:
    No, you dont have to create your character's appearance based on a card, its just the backstory and an idea i like with my character.
    No you dont have to be a survivor.
    No, you dont have to wear armor.
    No you cannot wear other Nekroz armors besides trish, they are mine Razz.
    My character being a blacksmith has nothing to do with dueling, it is simply one of his perks/skills and a bit more of his backstory


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    Re: [OOC/Sign-Ups]Chaos Apocalypse

    Post by Sylvan Mastery on Thu Apr 23, 2015 12:56 pm

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    Player Name: Sylvan Mastery
    Duel Network/DEVPro Name: (Burning Abyss)Dante

    Character Name: Ashata Kuromura
    Age:16
    Gender:Male
    Eye Color: Cyan
    Hair Color: Black with blue tips on each hair
    Height: 5 feet 7 inches
    Weight: 180 Pounds
    Distinguishing Characteristics: His look is always armor-like, no matter if it is supposed to be a formal dance or war. He doesn't trust anyone since the Supreme Lord took his family away, and he is a Highly careful and persuasive person.

    Deck Type: Nekrodolls (nekroz shaddolls)

    Back-story: Ashata was 10 when the disaster happened. He was outside playing with his friends in his front yard and dueling with his warrior deck when suddenly the evil army, Leaded by the Supreme Overlord, marched into town and sent everyone else to the stars as he hid in a barrel. As he wandered through the town he made sure to look before entering, finding a few guards searching through the scattered Duel Decks that the people's bodies had left behind. When he got home he found that his mother and father was gone as well, and each of their decks were sitting scattered. He gathered each card with care and mourned his losses before setting out the next day with his new deck and duel disk to find other survivors. 5 and a half years passed as the war raged on and he learned the ways of a true warrior, possessing high combat skills as well as learning from the best blacksmith there was, Oldor Hugate. They slowly faught a losing battle until one day the chosen one finally defeated the Supreme Overlord. To this day, Ashata wonders around in his Dragonic Armor that was modeled after his father's favorite card, Nekroz of Trishula, and the armor is his mother's favorite colors, Black and Purple, going from town to town as a wanted criminal, dueling to keep his life and freedom.
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    Re: [OOC/Sign-Ups]Chaos Apocalypse

    Post by TheRaidRaptorKing on Thu Apr 23, 2015 1:50 pm

    Player Name:-Keeps Blank-
    Duel Network/DEVPro Name: TheChaosKnight

    Character Name: Akihiko Akuma
    Age:17
    Gender:Male
    Eye Color: Left Eye Is Golden while Right Eye Is Black
    Hair Color: Blonde / Black
    Height:5.8
    Weight: 150 Pounds
    Distinguishing Characteristics: The Always matching pair of Light and Darkness. Also, Wears the Armor of Plantellarknight Ptolemaios but with Angelic Wings.
    Deck Type: Zefra(Shaddolls, Nekroz, Yang-Zings, Tellarknight)
    Back-story: A Boy who was inherited with a special gift, the powers of Light. Everybody thought the boy was the main reason why the Supreme Overlord appeared so they hated him. He wanted to fix their suspicion so he decided to stand against the Supreme Overlord, Akihiko knew he didn't stand a chance so he did the most dangerous thing: He sealed the darkness from the Supreme Overlord Inside himself so he can't cause anymore destruction. To This day, he is sealed himself in a catalyst until he decides that it is the right moment to awaken himself.
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    Re: [OOC/Sign-Ups]Chaos Apocalypse

    Post by Ptolemy on Thu Apr 23, 2015 1:58 pm

    Player name : Ptolemy
    DN name : (Animegods) Ptolemy

    Character name : Marwick Lute (Real name : Marwick Vessalius)
    Age : 15
    Gender : Male
    Eye color : Emerald Green
    Hair Color : Black
    Height : 5'8"
    Weight : 139 lbs
    Distinguishing Characteristics : Wears a white dress shirt a gray vest and black tie with some pants and socks,shoes and a overcoat. He's friendly to people at first but is actually a cold,calculating person at heart.He always carries a dagger in his pocket just in case his life's in danger

    Deck Type : Mecha Phantom Beasts

    Back-story : Marwick was born into the technologically advanced city of Aerola where inventing was the occupation of nearly 40% of the City.He lived a happy life as the son of the duke of Aerola.His life was turned upside-down after the Supreme king's army lay waste to Aerola and even with all of it's technology they couldn't stop them due to their own peaceful nature.Marwick escaped the city through a boat and hid in other cities and disguised himself as a merchant to hide his identity.He went by the name of "Marwick Lute" to avoid suspicion.He travelled from city to city looking for news about the Supreme King.At nights he would fall asleep polishing his father's deck who had given it to him during his escape.His only hope and guiding light was finding and defeating the evil that had caused him such pain
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    Re: [OOC/Sign-Ups]Chaos Apocalypse

    Post by Neo☆ on Thu Apr 23, 2015 2:16 pm

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    Duel Network/DEVPro Name: Neonhero14

    Character Name: Neo
    Age: 15
    Gender: Male
    Eye Color: Blue
    Hair Color: Black
    Height:5'6
    Weight:130
    Distinguishing Characteristics: Semi Long dread locks, coca brown skin,and has a lean muscular look. Has A blue scar  across his right eye.
    Deck Type: Qliphorts
    Back-story: Neo is a fun, care free and idiotic person. He really isn't all that serious, and loves to screw around. He is Living the happy life. Even though he grew up on the streets not knowing his parents at all, he still makes a living. He is a multimillionaire, all thanks to his preference as being one of the worlds most  feared bounty hunters.


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    Re: [OOC/Sign-Ups]Chaos Apocalypse

    Post by duckymomo101 on Thu Apr 23, 2015 2:24 pm

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    Player Name: The Annoying One
    Dn name:duckymomo222

    Character Name: Eiichi Senou
    Age:19
    Gender: Unknown
    Race: Demonic Machine
    Eye color: Cyan
    Hair color: Red and White
    Height: 6"1
    Weight: 537 lbs (from all the metal)
    Distinguishing characteristics: 8 black rotating spheres around  his back; wears shades; a braggart; hates synchro monsters; can use nearby metal to form demonic wings
    http://illiweb.com/fa/pbucket.gif ; can summon an army of meklord monsters at will.

    Deck Type:gearlords (geargia meklord)

    Back Story: Eiichi a city called Osaka, Japan. It was the central for synchro duelists where they could test their strength. Eiichi used an infernity deck and was extremely powerful; however, that was his downfall. From above 3 machines called meklords wisel, granel, and skiel detected strong synchro levels and came down to eradicate it. Not knowing his demise Eiichi kept turbo dueling, 'reving it up', and suddenly THEY descended. They destroyed everything the city, the decks, the people, and Eiichi' body was severely damaged and he was unconscious for 2 weeks. Luckily Natsuru Masashi, a machine specialist was able to rebuild his and Eiichi's body with spare metal parts now becoming demonic machines able to control the meklords. Exactly doing that, Eiichi absorbed their energy and memories and now seeks to destroy synchros. However, his body was not compatible with the energy thus releasing it and creating a worm hole and sending him to the "Chaos Apocalypse". And the story continues...
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    Re: [OOC/Sign-Ups]Chaos Apocalypse

    Post by Yugar on Fri Apr 24, 2015 1:31 pm

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    Player Name: Yugar
    Duel Network Name: yugar

    Character Name: Robin Raze
    Age: 15
    Gender: Male
    Eye Color: Brown
    Hair Color: Black
    Height: 5'9"
    Weight: 135 lbs
    Distinguishing Characteristics: Wears warrior armor and a sunglasses
    Deck Type: Fire Fist
    Back-story: During the disaster, Robin Raze's family was exterminated while they were eating dinner, he was the only survivor of his family and now is an orphan in a family that hates him and treats him badly. Robin Raze has been looking for revenge at the Supreme Overlord. But the only way to get his revenge is to store some mysterious dark power that can eliminate anyone that gets in the host's way.


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    Re: [OOC/Sign-Ups]Chaos Apocalypse

    Post by Phantom Knight on Sat Apr 25, 2015 12:57 am


    Player name : Phantom Knight
    DN name : (Animegods#StarLord

    Character name : Edward Stark
    Age : 18
    Gender : Male
    Eye color : Cyan
    Hair Color : Jet Black
    Height : 5'8"
    Weight : 140 lbs
    Distinguishing Characteristics : Wears a Jet black blazer over a red shirt and has a hell of ego.
    Deck Type : Galaxy-eyes

    Back Story: Edward Stark is the son of Howard Stark, The owner of a dueling company who is extremely rich. As a child Edward loved playing Duel monsters. When his father died for unknown reasons Edward had to become the owner of Stark Co. when he was 10. Edward still loves duel monsters and duels whenever he gets his free time. Stark learnt that his father was killed by Supreme Overlord and decides to take revenge on him and defeat the evil.
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    Re: [OOC/Sign-Ups]Chaos Apocalypse

    Post by TheRaidRaptorKing on Sat Apr 25, 2015 6:08 am

    OOC: Stark? That seems so familiar oh the irony
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    Re: [OOC/Sign-Ups]Chaos Apocalypse

    Post by Guest on Sat Apr 25, 2015 2:20 pm

    I might join this, but first I have to do my job. Yeah... Sad Life.

    Sylvan Mastery: Your character is clearly a Mary Sue, add some flaws. One I can suggest is your character's mobility, however it will take more then that flaw to make it balanced.

    TheRaidRaptorKing: Also a Mary Sue. I'd recommend you either start from scratch, or create a new character alltogether. There is no way you are a pair of light and dark, have perfect mobility while wearing armor, have wings. In general your OC is too unrealistic.

    Neon: Your character does need a slight flaw, and also a back-story isn't a personality. Think of a backstory as a history of the character.

    Duckymomo: A mary sue. Just add some flaws and you'll be fine.

    Yugar: Use a different OC.
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    Re: [OOC/Sign-Ups]Chaos Apocalypse

    Post by Phantom Knight on Sat Apr 25, 2015 11:08 pm

    It is Iron Man Rip off indeed.Irony
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    Re: [OOC/Sign-Ups]Chaos Apocalypse

    Post by Ptolemy on Sun Apr 26, 2015 1:15 am

    That means mine,Stress' and Phantom's characters are the ones that were completely realistic and non-mary sues? Wow didn't expect that since it's my first time making a OC............
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    What's a mary sue anyway?

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    Re: [OOC/Sign-Ups]Chaos Apocalypse

    Post by Guest on Sun Apr 26, 2015 1:22 am

    Plot read this: http://raidraptorsacademy.forumotion.com/t302-making-your-original-character-oc

    Also I'd recommend you a different OC then you are using for Duelist Kingdom, which is just mainly changing some details.

    Phantom's character I could somewhat believe and balanced. He has money, but he has an ego.

    Stress' Oc is fine as long as he doesn't have dragon like powers or such. then we have problems.
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    Re: [OOC/Sign-Ups]Chaos Apocalypse

    Post by Ptolemy on Mon Apr 27, 2015 5:05 am

    @StressGx wrote:Is this still a thing?

    Is what still a thing?
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    Re: [OOC/Sign-Ups]Chaos Apocalypse

    Post by Phantom Knight on Mon Apr 27, 2015 6:07 am

    Somebody likes my OC....... *sniff* *sniff*
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    Re: [OOC/Sign-Ups]Chaos Apocalypse

    Post by kingofblades on Mon Apr 27, 2015 8:58 am

    Player name: Kingofblades
    Dn: Bladecharge, Devpro: Maleficblade

    charter name: Gavin Banks
    gender: male
    age: 18
    eye color: Brown
    height: 5,9
    hair color: black
    weight: 180
    Distinguishing Characteristics : Has green armor shoulder pads. Has a necklace that has Yin and Yang symbol.
    Deck: D/D/D ( are we using the current format?)

    Back ground: After the supreme king way waste to his home town. Him and his mother Keria manege to escape the town with the help of a friend. Later on that friend betrayed them by killing his mother.Why did he do it? For money and the supreme king payed him in fear that she might be a problem in the future if she mastered her power and grew very powerful.  He killed him with a knife and he hardly trust people anymore and he trust only a few selection of nobles. He wants to trust more if he can trust them. He holds his mother deck and had the power that his mother had. the power of Dimension . He plans to make things right so people don't suffer like he did from people that did him wrong. He has no regrets for what he is trying to do. He wears the necklace because his mother had it when she got killed.


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    Re: [OOC/Sign-Ups]Chaos Apocalypse

    Post by Ptolemy on Mon Apr 27, 2015 9:57 am

    bladecharge 2 Things: 1.It is the medieval era they don't have guns or bulletproof vests.
    2.There were no politics in the medieval era The only people with that kind of authority would be kings and nobles and I dont get why you wouldn't trust them

    And also,you didn't explain about the mom's powers or the season why your friend killed her.It's a back-story SO that kind of information allows us to add plot twists and whatnot to the story

    and yeah one more thing why does he wear ol yin-yang
    necklace? even articles need a reason to be worn Razz

     btw any of you guys know when this thing's gonna start?
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    Re: [OOC/Sign-Ups]Chaos Apocalypse

    Post by kingofblades on Mon Apr 27, 2015 10:22 am

    Okay i will edit it
    after editing this is what i came up with.

    Back ground: After the supreme king way waste to his home town. Him and his mother Keria manege to escape the town with the help of a friend. Later on that friend betrayed them by killing his mother.Why did he do it? For money and the supreme king payed him in fear that she might be a problem in the future if she mastered her power and grew very powerful. He killed him with a knife and he hardly trust people anymore and he trust only a few selection of nobles. He wants to trust more if he can trust them. He holds his mother deck and had the power that his mother had. the power of Dimension . He plans to make things right so people don't suffer like he did from people that did him wrong. He has no regrets for what he is trying to do. He wears the necklace because his mother had it when she got killed.

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    Re: [OOC/Sign-Ups]Chaos Apocalypse

    Post by Guest on Mon Apr 27, 2015 4:02 pm

    @Ptolemy wrote:bladecharge 2 Things: 1.It is the medieval era they don't have guns or bulletproof vests.
    2.There were no politics in the medieval era The only people with that kind of authority would be kings and nobles and I dont get why you wouldn't trust them

    And also,you didn't explain about the mom's powers or the season why your friend killed her.It's a back-story SO that kind of information allows us to add plot twists and whatnot to the story

    and yeah one more thing why does he wear ol yin-yang
    necklace? even articles need a reason to be worn Razz

     btw any of you guys know when this thing's gonna start?

    Are you the host? No. Are you me? No. Don't do my job. If you have a complain notify the host or me. Also the power of dimension whatever it is, needs some flaw.
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    Re: [OOC/Sign-Ups]Chaos Apocalypse

    Post by kingofblades on Mon Apr 27, 2015 4:22 pm

    Okay then how about this. It can't be used to hurt light pure heart people. basically people who are filled with nothing but light. Using it incorrectly can result in something bad like a injury or death. the power can be countered by the power of light dimension. the power is can teleport yourself and other people and can also teleport elemental attacks over to hit enemies. Like fire.Ice, Wind,Thunder etc. if you want it limited then it would be fire,water,wind and thunder. Also he must focus on where he is teleporting himself and other people. Like there body parts If that would be allowed.

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